The ad that trivialises tragedy.

Opinion

Jeff Brooks, creative director at TrueSense Marketing, has served the nonprofit community for more than 20 years, working as a writer and creative director on behalf of a variety of organisations, including CARE, Bible League International, World Vision, Feeding America, World Relief and dozens of urban rescue missions and Salvation Army divisions. He blogs at Future Fundraising Now, podcasts at Fundraising is Beautiful and is a columnist for Fundraising Success magazine. In previous careers, he’s been an English teacher and a classical musician. He lives in Seattle in the USA.

Read more about Jeff and why he is highlighting the bad, the ugly and the very worst of fundraising adverts for SOFII.



More from this author:
 

If you’ve ever walked with someone as they descended into dementia, you know it is one of the most gut-wrenching, anguishing things that can happen. We should all fervently hope and pray for treatments and a cure for Alzheimer's disease.

And that’s clearly what the Alzheimer Society of Montréal wants too. But you can't really tell from this stupid ad:

Here’s a detail, so you can see the ‘punch line’:

Alzheimer’s almost hits the category of ‘too scary to talk about’. And that might lead people to reach for metaphors and analogies to talk about the disease and what it does.

But this computer hard drive analogy is inept. Not only that, it’s glib and dehumanising. Roger, even if he’s in the late stages of Alzheimer’s, is not a blank hard drive. He’s still a human being.

Worse still, comparing the deep human tragedy of Alzheimer’s with the minor problem of a broken hard drive just pushes everyone further from understanding and caring about this disease. Losing a hard drive is a pain – possibly a huge pain. But it can’t even come close to comparing to the heartbreak, fear and pain of Alzheimer’s.

What someone should have asked is: What are we trying to accomplish? What action or attitude do we hope to engender with this message? It appears nobody asked that, so they ended up with a pointless and misleading analogy that trivialises the very thing the organisation is dedicated to fighting.

As you might expect, this is the work of an ad agency.

Thanks to Osocio for the tip.

 

alzheimer's

oooh i see what they've done there - they've brought alzheimer's up to date haven't they? made it relevant! sigh.

this is horrifying in its

this is horrifying in its insensitivity to the suffering of a real human being and his family. it makes my heart hurt.

Poor.

The ad implies that the person is dead, there's nothing left. It's misrepresenting the disease, dehumanizing sufferers and their caregivers and is just a really bad visual that barely catches my attention in the first place.

Best to put these into

Best to put these into context. Easy for us to be critical without understanding where this was seen, who are they talking to? Was it part of a whole campaign with other messaging, radio, other print. So let's see the case study of the whole campaign before we judge one poster! My question is - did it actually achieve what Alzheimer Society of Montréal wanted it to?? If it did, then who cares if like it or not? The ad clearly is not pitched at you Jeff.

Offensive

My mother has journeyed with Alzheimer's for 10 years now and I find this offensive. She's still in there.

Post new comment

CAPTCHA
This question is for testing whether you are a human visitor and to prevent automated spam submissions.
Fill in the blank

Thank you

SOFII gratefully acknowledges the generous and catalytic support of the Joffe Foundation, UK, which has made possible SOFII's growth and development to date.

'My Trust is delighted with its investment in SOFII. We are very pleased that we have been able to be of assistance in the launch of this important initiative.'
Lord Joel Joffe.

About SOFII

SOFII is supervised by The SOFII Foundation, a registered charity in the UK, No 1124743.

SOFII’s development director is Sue Kershaw. She can be reached at sue@sofii.org

'We love SOFII. Next year we hope to help again.' 
Lynne, HMA, Vancouver.

© The SOFII Foundation 2010. http://www.sofii.org.

 

 

Get in touch

Once you have registered you will automatically be kept up to date with how SOFII develops. For any other queries please visit our contact page.